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So many plot gaps that were filled! Also, the main players are on the field, people saying things that others say in the future (I'm looking at you, Jill), Nemmy....isn't nice. Goddamn this 'No Valid Response Received error' is fucking annoying.
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Love it, especially the bit at the beginning with the mother and little boy. I like such moments in dramatic/horror stuff, I guess it adds some life to them. Who is the voice who speaks to him over the phone? Will you write more or is this fic completed?